witch+necklace=bad luck(aka my fairy tale writing)

once upon a time in a land far far far far far far away their was a village it was on the edge of a deep dark woods in the village there was a princess.Once when it was a sunny summer morning she went for a walk in the woods.After ten minutes she felt tired so she sat down on a log.Suddenly the log rolled over and she fell into a bush &found"A necklace I wonder who dropped it?" seeing as she really liked shiny things "I did" said a voice it was a soft voice it sounded very kind anyway while I was describing the  voice a young girl had appeared"you can keep it"she said.
Then suddenly the girl run away the princess put the necklace on.Then suddenly a voice screamed "give me that necklace"  a witch appeared  she shot a spell over the princess's head it hit some vines witch instantly sprung to life & sprung around
Susan   but her brother prince Caspian(say it like cars-pie-an)who was walking past the woods at the time heard her for he had ears like a hare he quickly ran to the rescue climbed a tree and threw his sword at the witch and killed her so they lived happily ever after

THE END